Friday, March 30, 2012

Hot Water Beach

Hot Water Beach


We walked to hot water beach. There was a beach walkway from the campsite and it was quite long. We followed it to Hot Water Beach so we could dig holes in the sand with our shovels. When we arrived we investigated the rock pools. After that we dug a huge hole and played in the waves. If you dug to deep you get burnt though if you don’t you can relax.
By Brendan
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6 comments:

  1. mikaylaMarch 30, 2012 at 11:28 AM

    i like the title

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  2. Room 5 Paterangi SchoolMarch 30, 2012 at 11:39 AM

    Awesome paragraph Brendan. Did you ever get lossed. LOL .

    from Sophie

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  3. Room 5 Paterangi SchoolApril 2, 2012 at 10:22 AM

    Good punctuation brendan, Like your story because it has good punctuation.

    Samuel.

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  4. AnonymousMay 9, 2012 at 9:06 AM

    what do you mean by gettig bernt? that sound very danerrus? -kody san digo ?

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    1. AnonymousMay 11, 2012 at 11:26 AM

      the water was very hot. it was so hot it burnt you.
      Brendan

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  5. AnonymousMay 9, 2012 at 9:08 AM

    what do you mean by getting burnt? that sound very danerrus.vi


    - kody sun set view

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