Hot Water Beach
We walked to Hot Water Beach. The rock pool had some creatures and it looked cool. It was hard to find a good spot though Sophie tried to trick me with the hot water. Some people made a warm pool. Two pools were close together and they joined them to together. I hopped in the pool they made which I relaxed in.
By Jonathan
great paragraph Johnothan. It was really cool. I liked how sophie tried to trick you in the hot water. Liam
ReplyDeleteWhat kind of creatures were thre Johno.I think you can improve on your first sentence as a little longer. Anyways your story was cool.
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Wow, that sounds like a fun day Jonathon! Kai From San Diego
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