Golf with Sunset
“Fore!”,
shouted Sunset as Dad hit his golf ball through the trees! Sunset skipped off to search for the
ball. He looked in the sheep paddock,
but it wasn’t there! He looked in the
trees, but it wasn’t there either! (He
thought he may have seen a Kiwi bird though!).
He looked in the bunker, still not there! Dad said, “it must be in the hole!”. Sunset looked in the hole, ran back to Dad
and said, “the ball is not in the hole!”.
Suddenly,
there was a ‘splash’! Sunset had dived
into the water! He came out of the
water, but without the golf ball. Where
could it be? Then, Sunset looked behind
Dad and the golf ball was right there!
It must have bounced back off a tree!
Sunset was happy that he’d found the golf ball because it meant that we
could carry on with the rest of our game.
By Kaeden Cresswell
Kaeden showing Sunset how to drive a golf ball.
Sunset helping with some putting.
Sunset looking fr the golf ball.



Looks like you and sunset had a fun time golfing.
ReplyDeleteYes, we had heaps of fun, thank you!
DeleteThat looks fun!
ReplyDeleteFrom Max
Yes, it was great fun!
DeleteWow, how far away was the tree! Bowie(:
ReplyDeleteThere are trees everywhere on the course, it's hard to miss them!
DeleteDid you get a hole in one? Ryan
ReplyDeleteNot quite! But we still had great fun!
DeleteDid sunset make a hole in one.
ReplyDeletefrom emir
Nearly, but he hit his shot a bit too big!
Deletewhat does fore mean
ReplyDeleteIt's what you shout in golf if you hit a bad shot and you think that it might hit someone or go out of bounds. So it's like a warning to other players.
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ReplyDeleteLooks like you and sunset had a fun time golfing from Rachel.
ReplyDeleteYes, we had a great time, thank you Rachel.
DeleteKeaden that sounds like fun I would like to come there and golf with you guys. Sincerely,
ReplyDeleteDev
We would really like to take you out golfing too!
DeleteSounds fun
ReplyDeleteHenry
It was great fun, thanks Henry.
DeleteLooks like you had really fun. Michael
ReplyDeleteIt was great fun, thanks Michael.
DeleteDid Swampy actually go in the water?
ReplyDeleteFrom Bronnie
Yes, Sunset did go into the water!
DeleteIt looks like Sunset had a splash. Who won?
ReplyDeleteFrom,
Simone
Yes, Sunset was pretty wet! I think Dad won by one shot!
DeleteThat looks really fun!!!!
ReplyDeleteKaia
It was great fun, thanks Kaia!
DeleteHi,i am Liam and i really like your story. My favorite picture was when you were with the pig.
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