Hot Water Beach
Room5 went to the relaxing hot water beach. Georgia and I went in the sea and got some breath taking body surfing. I found a cool pool so I made walls though a guy in a golf cart ran it over. Then I went in the big hot pool. I felt so itchy and I itched myself. Then we started walking back though I got dizzy and nearly collapsed.
By Jessie J
Hy jessie awesome paragrapph the wave was awesomelike you said. By georgia.
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ReplyDeleteJessica its so good i do not think you need to inprove in any think. By Georgia.
ReplyDeletegreat story jessica. great discriptive words! liam
ReplyDeleteHey bro u r awsome but i am more awesome laters g Jessie
DeleteBy the way nice story!