Hot Water Beach
We went to Hot Water Beach. Sometimes the water got to hot and everyone was yelping away. We had to dig a lot so the water got hot but not too hot. It was fun digging. Then the adults got in and even some people we didn’t know. The water, which was really hot, burnt my feet.
By Danielle
Nice paragraph Danielle, I think it is really cool.
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Dan it's so good i love it but you could put alot together and you should noot put to much commas it was so good By Georgia.
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