Friday, March 30, 2012

Hot Water Beach

Hot Water Beach
On camp we went to the Hot Water Beach. We dug out the sand and the water got hot. The water was nice though it burnt me. The water gets hot from the volcanic activity underneath the ground. The awesome part was that some friends and I were putting sand on one of the parent’s legs while he was talking to some of the boys. The hot water beach was fun so I want to go back and do it all again.
By Sophie Stocker
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23 comments:

  1. AnonymousApril 2, 2012 at 10:27 AM

    Nice story, love your use of scientific words but don't make your sentences too long.
    From Jessie!

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  2. mikaylaApril 2, 2012 at 10:30 AM

    what was the best part?

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  3. Room 5 Paterangi SchoolApril 2, 2012 at 10:38 AM

    That was interesting it would have been fun.You need some more exciting words.
    By Jonathan

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  4. AnonymousMay 9, 2012 at 9:00 AM

    was the beach near a volcano

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  5. AnonymousMay 9, 2012 at 9:02 AM

    was it near a volcano

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  6. AnonymousMay 9, 2012 at 9:03 AM

    I liked how you layed out your paragraph. But what was your favorite part?


    From Ryan of San Diego.

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  7. AnonymousMay 9, 2012 at 9:05 AM

    That sounds like a lot of fun. I wish I could go to Hot Water beach. I would love to play in the water.I hope your burn feels better.

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    Emma from Sunset View

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  8. AnonymousMay 9, 2012 at 9:06 AM

    That beach sounds really fun because the water is hot! Here in San Diego, the water is always freezing. Do you guys have wetsuits in New Zealand? I wish I could come there!

    From, Cole in San Diego

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  9. AnonymousMay 9, 2012 at 9:07 AM

    Did the hot water feel like a hot tub? Did the hot water burn you bad,or did it not hurt that bad?

    From:Daniel from san deago

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  10. AnonymousMay 9, 2012 at 9:12 AM

    I can bet that is awesome! Did it take long to dig the hole? How did the water get warm? So was it like a hot tub except with salt water? How did the parent who you were putting the sand on, not noticed you did put sand? I can bet you had a marvelous day!
    from Jessica in Sunset View.

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    1. Room 5 Paterangi SchoolMay 18, 2012 at 12:00 PM

      no it didnt take that long to dig it.
      the water got hot from the volcanic activity under
      the ground

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  11. AnonymousMay 9, 2012 at 9:13 AM

    Wow! That sounds cool and fun! Its too bad you burnt yourself. Why did you choose to go to that camp? It seems awesome there! Did you like it there? I would love it there because it seems fun.
    From, Jordan

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  12. Room 5 Paterangi SchoolMay 18, 2012 at 11:56 AM

    Hi sophie that camp was realy cool we all had lots of fun. I realy like you story. Kate

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  13. Room 5 Paterangi SchoolMay 18, 2012 at 11:58 AM

    Hi again but this is so cool! you are lucky beacause I have no comments but I want some!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!




    Kate

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