Friday, March 30, 2012

WE WENT TO THE MUSEUM

WE WENT TO THE MUSEUM

AND WE SAW THE OLD MACHINES. MY FAVOURITE PART WAS THE MACHINES. AFTER THAT WE PLAYED ON THE PLAYGROUND THEN WE WENT TO OUR CAMP SITE AND WE TO HOT WATER BEACH AND WE WENT FOR A SWIMMED AND IT WAS FUN.
BY KODY
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4 comments:

  1. Room 5 Paterangi SchoolApril 2, 2012 at 10:24 AM

    you have got this story on three times Kody.

    Samuel.

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  2. Room 5 Paterangi SchoolApril 2, 2012 at 10:25 AM

    I liked you're sentence structure.I liked how you put you're favourite thing.You need to put some interesting worlds.
    By Jonathan

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  3. AnonymousApril 2, 2012 at 10:25 AM

    your story sounds awesome. by jayden

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  4. AnonymousApril 2, 2012 at 10:26 AM

    your story sounds awesome. by jayden

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