Hi! I really liked your story. It was very enthusiastic. and it was also very creative. it was very well written, and I liked the part where you said "the fierce fire". That is something I have never heard before. that was probably the most creative part. You also used very good adjectives. I never would have made that up, because I have never really been good at making things up. I'm very impressed. You rock at making things up!
What do you think about a future like this? Would like to live in a world where glass could do this? Leave a comment below about what you think.
ReplyDeleteIt would be amazing- until we have a power cut!
ReplyDeletewow that looks awesome! best day ever! Kate.
ReplyDeleteIt looks impossible!!
ReplyDeleteSamuel
Hi! I really liked your story. It was very enthusiastic. and it was also very creative. it was very well written, and I liked the part where you said "the fierce fire". That is something I have never heard before. that was probably the most creative part. You also used very good adjectives. I never would have made that up, because I have never really been good at making things up. I'm very impressed. You rock at making things up!
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Natalie